Fix a cold email with low reply rate

Diagnose and rewrite this sales email.

{{paste_your_email}}

Recipient: {{title_industry_company_size}}
What I'm selling: {{describe}}
The ask: {{what_i_want_them_to_do}}
Open rate: {{value}} · Reply rate: {{value_2}}

Please:
1. Identify the top 3 problems (be direct)
2. Rewrite the subject line (3 options)
3. Rewrite the full email (under 100 words)
4. Explain what changed and why it should improve replies

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